"Scenes from the Loft" by Citygirl

Recommendation: Citygirl's "Scenes from the Loft"

While all of the stories recommended on this blog so far have been completed and archived, today's recommendation is a story that, while still in progress, shows such promise that it deserves to be added here although only a few chapters have been posted. Citygirl's second contribution to the fan fiction forum on the Scrubs Message Board, "Scenes from the Loft," has provided Scrubs fic readers with a welcome respite from the angst on screen with its funny situations and its promising Robin/Patrick interaction.

The premise for the story comes from a piece of speculation about an upcoming plotline for the show: Robin moves into a loft with Kelly and Lainey. Significant time has passed from the arguments that Robin and Patrick had on the show last week, although the two of them have not reconciled. Citygirl puts Robin through her paces as the three women move into their new place. Each humorous scene that results requires Patrick to show up at their loft, and each time he appears he and Robin move closer to renewing their relationship. The story is well crafted, and the writing is effortless.

"Scenes from the Loft" can be found here on the Scrubs Message Board. Because she is still in the process of writing the story, I'm sure that she would appreciate comments and encouragement as she continues both this story and her other on-going fic project, "The Green-Eyed Doctor." If you enjoy the story as much as I do, please let her know! Thank you, Citygirl, for sharing your story with us, and I think I speak for lots of Scrubs fic readers when I say that I can't wait to read what's next!

Happy Reading!
DD

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